moon background

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4

for the background..which one is better..the brightness..

1,2,3,4

loading page

i make the object smaller than b4..while the 0,50,100 bigger ...as well as the background..darker..is it better now??

commentssss

tq!

4 pages..refined..

any comments?

main page

when the cursor moves to certain part of the main page...

wat do u think..any comment....

4pages

these r the content pages of my story,the bamboo cutter..i need comments from u guys...tq very much..
for the loading pages n mainpage,stil in progress,need to change sth...

1)character introduction 1.can u identify what page r u in actually?(eg.home,character...)
2.Is the msg clear enough for primary school kids?
3.hows the colour combination?
4.others feedback

2) game
1.can u identify what page r u in actually?(eg.home,character...)
2.can you find the axe?do u think it's ok for kids?
3.hows the colour combination?
4.others feedback



3.rejected all the princes


1.can u identify what page r u in actually?(eg.home,character...) 2.is the dialogue box suitable?
3.is the background suitable?
4.do you think the background might overtake the text?(no written yet)
5.others..

4)back to the moon


1)is the background suitable?
2)hows the colour combination
3)others..



thank you for ur time..

game

which one is better?1,2,3,4....in terms of the colour background,and the content inside..darker or lighter?

background

which one do u think is better?i mean the opacity of the background...(the page is not done yet...)just wanna know which one is more preferably...because other pages i gota use the same opacity tooo..there';s one page i tried..if the opacity is too low..it will be too dull..so ....comment..pls..tq..
this one with higher opacity..

this one is the background with lower opacity...

main page

this one is the whole page with transparency except for the man..
this one is the page where the home,character ,read story n synopsis r not using transparency...

so..transparency or x transparency is better...or other comments...

with frame n title.

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the loading pages are with frame and title as u can see...other than that it's the same as the previous 1..which one u think is better?or any other suggestion/comment r welcomed....thx..

loading page without the frame..

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find the axe!(rough)

i;ve sent it to some of my frens n younger cousins..they tot they had to click to play..swt..and the axe is kinda hard to be found..a fren of mine ask is it the B word..-.-
maybe i should modify the colour of the axe holder..

title +

the character n the bamboo would be in the loading page.it has not been done yet,haven reali decided the background for it yet...oh ya.i've added some gradient for the character n bamboo too..

this is the japanese folklore's title...the bamboo cutter

loading page

the character is without the stroke

This is the loading page without the background yet..

with or without stroke is better ler?