Hey. Good job! Really nice work you have there. I'll give a 9 out of 10 for your slides. It feels like I'm playing those really cool USA-made children games unlike those crappy MIC children games I played before. Anyway, I have some few trivial comments to make. It's about the labeling for the "sections". Y don't you put "Read the Story!! <-- (emphasis on the exclamation marks)" instead of just plain "Read story". And "Character's Description" instead of just "Character" which will convey a much clearer message to the kids.
any comments?
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i like the colours! very nice oh!
tqtq...
xoxo
yea.. i like the colors.. n the designs too.. and the story also .. duno who so geng , found a good story like tis 1.. ahaha
aceh....
wahhh so fast ady OAo Cool!
i would just say overall its nice ady..
just need to put more textures
comment on mine too
Overall, it's nice. Color combination is nice as well. Geng!
overall, NICE=) just nice
thank you all!!
xoxo
Hey. Good job! Really nice work you have there. I'll give a 9 out of 10 for your slides. It feels like I'm playing those really cool USA-made children games unlike those crappy MIC children games I played before. Anyway, I have some few trivial comments to make. It's about the labeling for the "sections". Y don't you put "Read the Story!! <-- (emphasis on the exclamation marks)" instead of just plain "Read story". And "Character's Description" instead of just "Character" which will convey a much clearer message to the kids.
hmmm...i'll think bout it...
thankss!!
hahaha. yixiang giv u a useful comment neh!
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