third version @@

i've change the colour of the elephant to become more outstanding..does it look better now?
changes:
-colour of the elephant
-logo,i just use her last name( 和）
-the text on the leaf.

interface for nicole

main page,the navigators are the leaf,water splash,and the elephant


preferences,that stated wat she likes n doesnt like.


healthy formula,cuz she is very concerned bout this!!


Diary,cuz she likes to jot down things that happen

we are asked to create interface design for our client,which is one of our classmate.
so my classmate is nicole,she loves elephant..
earth tone,
and free flow

most importantly,we have to design the page based on simplicity.
so this are the modified version of the pages..do they look better?
any comments?
eg,the placement of the logo(her chinese name)...the arrangement..texts hard to read?

thankss~

1st interface

main page healthy formula



diary about me

Posters,Design Method 1

first poster,illustration




2nd poster,graphic,vector.
3rd poster,collage
2nd media
4th poster,digital montage
2nd media
(mm..after presentation,i oso feel that this is not that suitable...cuz the poster is"local" but i've put in in the "wrong country" @@...but at least..they r asian too..haha
suan le ba..careless >.<>

aaaa ..i';m not satisfied with my presentation today because i've swallowed lots of words n explaination..maybe too tired n gan jeong *.*
reali not satisfied.. :X ...although they r not perfect...stil i gota like them..at least i've tried my best...T.T
however,it's already passed...
really really hope i can do better in the coming projects...
*prays*

I CAN DO IT!N I HAVE TO DO IT!

collage

BUBBLE

the first was the original
second n third ,i've added some reflection of the boy..as well as the shirt colour diff...
what do u think?with or without reflection is better?

illus

better now?the slogan
i personally think thhat i;m gonna use the first in the 2nd media,for the faber castell crayon packaging.cuz clearer..
but for poster,mostly second or third,which have the childhood feel...

comments?@@

montage2

i've deleted some of the bubbles but remain the kid's shirt in orangy colour
but i've adjusted the wall a lil blue oso..
cuz some say the bubble might blend with the wall ...

wil it look better?or the previous 1 better

poster,digital montage

which one better
1st,change shirt colour,
2nd,no other bubble added
3rd,diff types of bubble added
4th,with polka dots background

other comments r welcomed

poster kid

frenss....
now i've added the slogan...
which one you think is better?
click on the image to view a clearer version..
thanks!!

poster ,.vector

hey guys...which one is better?
or any other comments please let me noe...